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PostSubject: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:10 am

Hey guys I've been promissing you that I'll post one of my novel here. So after a long time I've finally find a time to translete it to english! Hope you all like it!

Shijin No Goushujin-sama
[shijin-master]


"Kitto itsuke tadori tsukeru yo
Tsumadsui tatte akiramenai"
(We'll always make it
someday, so I won't give up if I failed)

[Dream Wing--Minami Kuribayashi]



Prologue

"How long had I've been here? I had never known it

anymore. I can't see the light anymore, and I can't

feel the breeze. I can't move my body, I can't even

breathe. . ."
"Whoever hear my voice. . , please freed me from this

sealed. . ."


***
A girl walk to a school with a grumphy face, in her

right hand she grabed an envelope with "promotion

letter" word in it, and in her other hand he grab a

very long warped sword and a bag.
She sight for a moment, after that she look at the name

board of the school.
"Hikari (light)?" she said. "What a very suck

name!Can't they choose another name for it?" she said

again outloud.
Suddenly someone touch her back. She look at that

stranger and found a very big man with a very cruel

face standing behind him.
"I'm sorry girl, I can't stand hearing someone making

fun with my schoo!" he said angrily.
"Then pardon me! I'm just a new student in this school

and it's very obvious that I don't know that thing

right?" she said inocently.
But that man seems hate the way that girl talk. He look

straight to that girl eyes cruely. But the girl seems

don't realy care with this man.
Some students that just only pass by watch that secne

with a very fear look, but some of the watch it with a

big intrest.
"Oi, I think you shouldn't make fun with Gori, he'll

never go soft with anybody, so you better give up!"

somebody from the crowd shout.
The girl just show them a very mysterious smile when

she heard that word, she put the letter in her right

hand to her pocket and grab her warped sword lightly.
"Bring it on!" she said, and it's definetly make that

man's emotion reach it peaks.
"YOu better prepared youself!" he shout angrily as he

run with a very fast speed toward that girl.
The girl just yawn and then jump toward that man.
A moment later that girl had landed savely in the floor

and continue walking to the school leaving the faited

man with her foot print in his face lightly.
"Hoooaaaeeem!!! So borring!!!" she shout as she

streching her body and walk in the school building.



Chapter 1. Weird

Beside a cafe, some high school female students were

enjoying their chit chat. Between all of them, there

were a girl who only hearing all her friends story with

a very borring face.
And because she can't stand the borringnes of the story

anymore she yawn widely in front of all her friends and

of course it definetly make all of her friends staring

at her now.
"YUNNA!!!" they shout angrily at her. That girl look

back at them with a surprised face, but then she's just

give a very wide smile to her friends.
"Hehehe, sorry guys! I just can't stand hearing your

fairytale anymore! By the way don't that story had been

out of date now?" she said inocently to her friends

that obviously make her friend's hand itchy that they

want to hit her head now.
"Hey look at the time! I have to go home now! You don't

want to see my goldfish die in starving don't ya? So

bye-bye!" she said as she run awah from her friends

cruelness.
But suddenly her friends watch a very horor secne.

Their face turn pale, and no word come out from their

mouth.
A truck run with a very high speed toward the girl, and

directly hit her.
Her body flew a few metter before it crash the floor. A

fresh blood flew from her head to the floor.
She can hear her friends scream voice now, and she

think that some people has rush to find a help as soon

as possible for her.
"Master. . ." suddenly a very gentle voice that seems

like calling her enter her head in the rest of her

consiousness.
"Huh? Who?" she said but then all seems blank.
***
"Are you realy alright Yunna?" Ayano ask. That girl

stares at her friends face with a very worried face.
"I'm 100% alright! Well, just a little hurt with the

body, maybe because I've been trew away yesterday!"

Yunna aswerd her friends question with a smile in her

face, but the smile suddenly disepear and turn into a

grumph face. "Come on! you've been asking this question

for three time and I'm already bored with it!" she

said.
"But, it's preety weird, a truck hit you with a high

speed yesterday, and look at you now, it's like that

secne yesterday was apear in the video game I play!"

Ayano said worriedly.
"Arrrgh!!! Come on! The important thing right now that

I'm alright and I can go back to this school! I've been

through this C.T Scan, rotgen, and all the tiring

observation, and it's wasting my money too, but look at

the result! The result say that I'M ONLY WASTING MY

MONEY STAYING AT THE HOSPITALL!" Yunna shout madly.

"Now, do you still want me to wast more money to make

the doctor swear 99,9% (why not 100, well doctor is

also a human right?) that I'm not a walking corps?" she

said again.
Ayano shut her mouth now. It seems that the acident

yesterday not only had a bad thing to her friend's body

(She still think that 00,1% opurtunity that Yunna is a

zombie still always there) but also to her purse. So

she better shut her mouth now and watch her friend act.
*BRUGH*
Acidently Yunna bump into her female senior and cause

that senior fell down.
"Ewww. . ., look what have you done! Say sorry!" shout

that senior.
"Sorry~" Yunna said inocently. She only bow her head in

a moment than she continue walking ignoring that

senior.
"Wait a minute, you think that sorry word is enough?!

Don't your mom ever tell you any good atitude? Hurry up

clean up my skirt!" the senior shout angrily.
Yunna stare at the senior from the top to the bottom.

Than she smirk at her.
"In such of this windy day you wear that short skirt!

Don't you affraid that some naughty wind gonna flew

your skirt away?" Yunna said as she laugh at that

senior and walk away.
But suddenly she heard the girl cried. When she glance

to that girl, a wind had already flew that girl skirt

and make her face turn red in just a moment. She run

maniacly to the school building.
"Hah! that's genious Yunna, how do you do that?" Ayano

ask unbeliefly.
"I, I don't know. . ." Yunna said confusely with what

she saw now.

(to be continue)


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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:08 am

Yays! We get to read one of your stories. Very Happy

Yuuna sounds very interesting. I wonder if she gained any new powers after her accident. Wink

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:03 am

This is so cool Fuu!

Looks that every thing Yuu wishes now will come true.Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 8:51 am

Hehehe, thanks guys, but her power is something more, not for make her wishes come true, but it's for something special. . .

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(Continue)
The first subeject of today was History. This lesson

always make all the students feel like a nightangle

were singing near their side now. But the difference

was this lesson were not created to make theri audience

sleep, but of course whoever sleep during this lesson

will experience what every body call as "The hell in

the world." Not only because this is the most boringnes

lesson in world but also because the teacher who teach

this lesson is the very stric one. So whoever

slumbering in this class will have a very long and

boring lecturer from this teacher plus a task to write

"I WON'T EVER SLEEP DURING CLASS AGAIN" 100x as the

prize. Definetly hell.
Yunna work very hard to make her stay awake in this

class. Her eyes had been very heavy, and the lesson

realy gave a numbing effect. Just once she think that

it'll be nice if an earth quake apear in her school and

all the student can't leave this school early.
Her imagination suddenly broke because of her class

mates panick cried. She stares at her friends with a

confuse face.
They all runing to all direction, some of them even

hide theirself below the table. Even Ayano pull her to

the below of the table too.
"What was happend?" Yunna said confusly. Ayano look at

her with unbelief face, but before she can spoke any

word the speaker in their class room shouting.
"Attention please! For All students please leave this

building imedietly!Repat, For all students please leave

this building imedietly!"
"Huh! Why is this so sudden?" Yunna said happily as she

trew all her thing to her back and ready to walk out of

her class.
"Are you creazy or what? In such of this huge earth

quake you still can act like that? Let's get out from

this building! Hurry!" Ayano shout as she grab Yuu's

hand and drag her out from the building with a ver high

speed. Just after they're all out a big explosion voice

apear in the distance.
"What is it?" Yuu said confusly, but Ayano seems to

busy to talk to her now. "You said that there was an

earth quake before but why I don't feel anything?" she

ask again.
Her friends look at her with an unbelief face. They all

look at each other and sight heavily.
"Are you alright Yunna?" Ayano said with a worried

tone.
Yuu fell into a deep silent. There's definetly

something strange with her body, but she don't know

what is it. The doctor must be haven't check her body

corectly, one of her nerve had been cut or something

but her body seems wrong now.
". . .a?! YUNNA!!!!" Sachi shout at her friend.
"Huh? What? What happening? Another earth quake?" Yuu

ask panickly.
"Are you creazy, you hope that Tokyo will be destroyed

by that earth quake?" Sachi said with an unbelief tone.

"Well, we're planing to go Karaoke after this, since

you are saved from the dangerous accident yesterday,

but it seems that you are not in a very good condition!

So we think you better go home and take a rest!" she

said again with a worry tone.
"What? No way! I'm going with you!" Yuu said.
"No way, you're going home right now! And don't argue

anymore!" Mika said cruely.
"So bye-bye for now Yunna!" Ayano said as she and her

other friend except Yunna walk away from that place

leaving Yuu with her funny grumph face.
"Huh! Traitor!" Yuu said as she tounge to her friends.

She step to the crossing bridge with a killing aura

near her.
"Mum! Look her hair burning!" a little boy who just

pass her shout as he point to Yunna's hair.
His mom seems not realy care with what that boy said,

but Yuu check her hair in that's right moment, and it's

true her hair burning.
She try to kill it but the fire now seems roaring like

her emotion right now. Suddenly someone touch her head

gently and the fire turn off. When she glance at the

stranger she found a very beautiful lady smiling at

her.
"Next time if you want to turn it off just calm your

self and it'll go away! There's no used of panick like

that!" the woman chukled as she said.
"Pardon me but who are you?" Yunna said rudely.
The woman smile again to her. "My name Megumi Yuri, I'm

a Mizu-master, nice to meet you!" the woman said

friendly.
"Momonoin Yunna!" Yuu said confusly "And. . ., tha

Mizu-master was. . ."
the woman suddenly laugh outloud when she heard Yuu's

word.
"Pardon me am I said something funny?" Yuu's said with

a dislike tone.
"Ha. . .ha. . .ha. . ., I'm sorry I just can't control

myself! It's not funny at all, just it's a name for

someone like ma, and of course you also had a name!"

Megumi said.
"Name?" Yuu said confusly. And suddenly she relised

something. This must be something about a name for the

material art master, and she'll be named as Master of

Material Art, since she mastered all kind of material

art.
"Follow me I'll lead you to someone who can name you!" Megumi said friendly as she walk. Yuu watch Megumi atitude confusly but in the end, she also follow Megumi's step.
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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 8:56 am

Very nice! Update soon please!

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:10 am

(I'll try to update it soon enough but well, I'm transleting it from my language version, so it's need some time)
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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:10 am

Take your time, awesome stories need it's time.Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Mon Jul 14, 2008 4:25 am

This is getting more interesting. I did assume that Yuuna's special power was making whatever she wanted come true but if that's not the case, guess we'll just have to wait and find out. Wink

I like Megumi. She seems kind. I can't wait to read how her character develops. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:41 am

and here's the new update!
Man I like holday, I can translete my novel freely in to english. But well I hope my writing ability is not as bad as I tought!

(Cotinue)

"Are we there yet?" Yuu ask unspirited. Megumi had took

her in a very long way and they haven't reach the place

she talk about.
"Don't worry Yuu! We'll be there in no time!" Megumi

said joyfully, and that what make Yuu sick. She had

heard that word from Megumi about an hour before, and

an hour before it too, and even an hour before it too.
Yuu's brain had produce a lot of creazy ideas. She

start thinking that Megumi might be lied to her. Ast

the proove since when they met in the crossing bridge

that woman always laughing at her question. But if it

so, what her goal? She had no idea about it.
Megumi led her to a tunnel. Yuu start think that she

might be kindnaped. But Megumi's face doesn't seems

like the kindnapper she saw in the movies. So what is

this Megumi main purpose? She continue thinking.
At last after some more walking, Megumi start opening a

rusty metal door that attach to the wall in the tunnel.

Yunna had already imagine that from that door some guy

dressed like MIB were jumping from that door and trying

to catch her. But it's not. There's only an empty room

inside it.
Megumi then opend the door that atached to the floor,

there were a ladder behind it, but it's sure a very

dark tunnel waiting them below it. And of course Yunna

still can't stop imagining that Megumi will start

bullying her there.
"Come on! We're almost there!" Megumi said as she climb

down the ladder. Yunna return back to the real world,

there's no way that Megumi will bullying her, because

if it's her main purpose she won't walk first to the

tunnel and not pushing her down to that dark room. She

take a very deep breathe and the she continueing

following Megumi's led.
"Take my hand, or you'll be lose in this room, it's

preety hard moving here!" Megumi said again when

they're already in the complete darkness of the room.
Yunna's creazy idea start growing again in her mind.

She start thinking that there'll be someone trying to

catch her here, and now when she's here, there's no

turning back. But her imagination never turn to be

reality. The only person there instead her is Megumi,

and she's realy leading her to a door who led them to

the exit of the darkness. They are now in side a big

building with a lot of people moving around them and of

course this building has a very bright lamp in it.
Megumi continue walking through the crowd. Sometimes a

people call her, and say hi to her, and some of her bow

in respect to her.
Suddenly she stop walking and stand in front of a door.

She pull Yuu's hand and led her inside the room.
That room look a bit different from the other office,

it's a bit dark and there are only one person inside

it.
Suddenly the person move closer to Yuu. She can't realy

see that person face but she's sure that that person is

only a kid. And her guess were close to the true one

when she heard that person speak.
"Wellcome to the main office of all onmyouji in South

Tokyo!" the kid said friendly. "My name Chiba Toshiya,

and just call me Toshiya, I'm the leader of all the

onmyouji in south Tokyo area!" he said again as he drew

his hand to shake hand. That kid realy got some

charisma, even as a leader he realy doesn't look like

Megumi's boss.
Megumi wear a white bright skirt and a long black pants

that realy make her look like a sucess career woman.

But Toshiya realy look like a normal junior high school

kid--he even wear the uniform--and he got a realy

bright blonde hair. And to make it even worst he wear a

sunglasess in such a dark room like this, wich make Yuu

get a hard time trying to see his face.
"Momonoi Yunna, nice to meet you!" Yuu said as she

shake that kid hand. "And about this onmyouji stuff you

said before. . ." she said again confusly. As long as

she know onmyouji were the Yin-Yang master, wich in the

time of Caesar Kanmu untill Meiji era were known as a

man with a power to make all the devil, bad spirits,

disaster, curse, and all that stuff like that go away.

So how can this junior high school kiddo became the

leader of all onmyouji--wich actualy known to be

extinct--in the south Tokyo area.
"Well, maybe this room is to dark to talk about this

thing let's move to my office room, okay!" Toshiya said

as he walk out of the room, and Yuu've got no choice

then following him confusly. She realy don't get it why

such of a kid like Toshiya want to spent time in that

dark room.
"Momonoi-san! We've been seeing the power that you

have! And we're realy need your power! That's why we're

inviting you to join our organitation!" Toshiya said as

he sit down in his seat.
Yunna hear that word with unbelief face. She realy

can't get what the power this kid are talking about,

and why her power needed, and where exactly herself

were now. The only thing she can do was standing like a

living corpse staring at Toshiya with a very dumb face.
"What we mean was you have to help us with your

ability!" Toshia repeated his word again.
"I refused! I realy don't have any interest in such of

a weird organisation like this!" Yuu said as she walk

out from the room.
"Wait a minute Momonoi-san! We realy need such an

onmyouji like you!" Toshiya try to stop. Yuu glance at

him for a moment with a cold eyes.
"Pardon me! But I don't have a lot of time to waste to

playing with such a kid like you! I don't even

understand what the onmyouji you talking about so. . ."
"But you have a very great power! You are a great

onmyouji! I know it I can feel it!" Toshiya still

trying his best to stop Yunna. I a moment something

enter Yuu's head.
"Goushujin-sama!" the same gentle voice as what she

heard during the acident yesterday entering her head

again.
"Arrgh!!! What should I care about that thing? I want

to go home!" Yuu shout as she walk away.
"I'm sure you'll be back!" Toshiya said as he show a

smirk to Yuu. Yuu turn her back at Toshiya and close

the door rudely behind her.
But suddenly she stoped her foot step, "Where am I

exactly?" she ask to her self with a dumb face.
***
". . ., it's near! I feel it's presence, the one who

can freed me! She's coming closer! Come, don't be

affraid! Find me! Freed me!!!"
***

Yunna had no idea how long had she've been walking.

She's lost and she had know it. But she's just to

stuborn to go back, and realy like to investigate this

building further.
Suddenly she found a door in the corner of a long

tunel. It's realy look like the door where she came

from with Megumi before. With her self confidence, she

opened that door, and enter it.
It was completly dark, no light at all, and it's realy

similar like the dark room she had pass when she reach

this building before, so the only thing she need to do

is just walking and she'll be outside feeling the fresh

air again.
But well, walking in the dark room is not that easy.

Yunna try to reach the wall, and use it as her lead.

But suddenly she grap something that feel like a paper

in the wall, and before she know it, she feel like her

power were sucked to that thing.
Yuu's panicly pull her hand out of it, but then she

just pull a switch just near that thing and the the

flash of sudden light fill the entire room.
Yunna try to adapt her eyes with the light, and when

she finish doing that she can found a big pillar

standing in the middle of the room.
The interesting part in that pillar was a statue of a

man who attached to it.
Yunna stares at that thing for a moment. She don't know

why but there's realy something about that thing (Yeah,

well. . ., who will never amazed with a half naked guy

with a very handsome face, attached to a huge pillar.

It's realy look like the Greek Gods statue in the ruid

of Greek).
But, she found something strange with that statue. She

don't know why but the statue look very sad to her.

It's like it want to freed hiself from the pillar,
But if she knew what will be happend later. She know

that she won't be amazed by the statue, since now when

she haven't take a good look at the statue, the statue

suddenly have a crack in it and it's start tearing off.

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:30 am

Ooohh I ownder if the statue will come alive. Smile

Reading about Toshiya reminds me a bit of Koema from YuYu Hakusho and Megumi like Botan from the same anime. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:16 am

It's been a preety hard time, but well here's the update. I think it's a preety bad translation for today. hehehe

(Continue)


Yuu look at the pillar fearfully. It's almost all of the skin of the statue tearing off from it's place. She was affraid tha when Megumi or Toshiya suddenly apear and make her paying for the statue because she was suspected as the one who break that glorious statue that she stare at during this thirty--yes only thirty--second.
But the real thing that make Yuu frightening is what below the paint skin of the status. It's a human! Or actualy he's a man. Thats the only word apear in Yunna's head.
But that's what in front of her now. A manwith half of his body traped in the huge pillar. And she know that that man was alive and not a living corpes or something like that--you know what I mean right--because the man was obviously open his eyes slowly, taking a deep breath and exhale it, smiling satisfied. And then look at Yunna with the eagle eyes that definetly will rush 100 mouse away. But, for Yunna? No way!
She had a black belt, and that eagle eye is the usual thing for her. But the problem is, Yunna were doubting her self if her hit will give any effect to the half pillar man.
"Oi, Mifuyu!!! At last you come again! Why are you just standing there like a doll? Hurry up freed me! You don't want to halfly freed me right? Hurry up!" said that man rudely.
But Yunna only looking at him confusedly.
"I'm talking to you dummy! Hurry up freed me!" Now that man shouting like a mad one.
Yunna who seems to get the point what that man talking about only poiting her finger to herself "Me?" Yunna ask stupidly.
"Of course it's you! Don't you see, you're the only one left here! I've called your name before right! Are you that stupid that didn't your own name anymore?!" shout that man again.
But this time his rude word realy make Yuu angry.
"Let me tell you something! What's your right ordering me like that! And who is the one you called Mifuyu? My name YUNNA!!! MOMONOI YUNNA!" Yunna shout angrily.
"Yunna?" that man murmuring to hiself confusedly. He's looking at Yuu from the top to the toe, and of course it's make Yuu's emotion reach it peak again.
"Hey, can't you stop staring at someone like that? You make me feel sick!" Yuu shout. But then she regret what she had done since that man attacking her with his eagle eyes. obviously Yunna won't just sit down and receive all that insult. She face that man with her tiger eyes, that make the fight of the eyes started.
"Mifuyu is prettier!" that man said coldly, now Yunna realy get angry with him.
"I don't know what your problem ugly guy, but my apearece has nothing to do with you! And I don't care about your coment!" Yuu shout angrily--she completly forgot that a moment before she had amazed with that man, even when he was in his statue mode.
"And she's more calm!" that man said again inocently. Now Yunna is completly mad with him.
"What's your bussines if I'm more fussy!" Yuu shout.
"I never said that you're fussy. I only said that Mifuyu is calmer than you" said that man calmly.
"Arrrgh!!! Do whatever you want!" Yuu said as she walk away.
"Wait a minute!" said the man as he grabed Yunna's hand. And in a flash she turn Yunna's head body to his face, and look at Yunna's face carefuly.
Yuu feel like her heart is going to explode soon. That man eyes look like it can cut her, and turn her into a piece in no time. Such a weird condition since that man is a half statue.
But don't call her Yunna, if she just play dumb in a man hand more than three second. A puch flew and hit that man face.
"Let me go!" Yuu shout angrily as she strugle to freed her self. But the man didn't let her go, he even look more piss of then before.
"Momonoi-sau! Are you here?" Megumi ask as she enter the room. But when he saw that man who grabing Yuu, her body seems turning into a statue.
"K, Kyo?! H, How?!"

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:11 am

Woah, now I'm wondering how the man in the statue became alive. I guess that Yuu's presence had something to do with it.

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:41 am

Sorry for being so late, but oh well this is all I got for now:

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"Free?" the man continue Megumi's question. "Bassicaly, I don't realy understand too. But I'm not fully freed, so please freed me ASAP!" said that man bossy.
Megumi look sureprised for some second but then she sight heavily. "I'm sorry Kyo, it's not like I don't want to freed you, but the problem is I can't!" Megumi said, it's unclear weather she's happy or upset when she say it. "the seal that sealed you is a very strong one, we have done all the thing we can do but we're already give up on doing it now!" she said again.
"What did you mean by you can't? Impossible!!! YOu're one of the elite group in this place and also one of the strongest onmyouji here! So it's impossible to hear that you said you can't!" said the man angry. "Don't you say that I can't remember when the time Mifuyu sealing me. YOu guys only standing there watching at me like a dumb person! You don't even tell my why I'm being sealed! Afterall, how can you say that you can't freed me? Mifuyu is not a miko, so you guys should have a power to break its sealed! If you don't want to do it just say it!" the man shout again.
Yunna watch the act of the man with a confused face. Both the man and Mifuyu keep debating without even notice her presence. Doesn't it mean that it's a perfect time to escape? But just before Yuu can even step her feet forward the land shaking with a mad power.
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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Thu Aug 14, 2008 5:40 am

Ooohh the ending is intriguing. I wonder if the earthquake was coincidence or planned timing.

I wonder if Kyo will ever be freed. I have a feeling that he will, though. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:50 am

Can't believe I found a time to translete my novel again.
Hope you like it! hehehe


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"Earthquake?!" Megumi shout unbelief.
Yuu watch all of it with a horor, she stand in her place like a statue, she never felt an eartquake as powerfull like this. If she doesn't knew the greatness of Japan building construction, She might believe that this building can be break and crowl to the ground in no time.
She try to stay calm and walk slowly to the door, unfortunetly just before she reach the door knop the door suddenly opend with a fast speed and Toshiya apear behind it.
That boy igore Yuu's shock face when he did it and run toward Megumi.
"Megumi!!! A yokai with earth element had successfully pass our barrier!!!" shout that boy ignoring Yunna and that half statue man named Kyo. But seems like that "Kyo" don't realy like to be ignored by someone.
"Hey, Chiba, long time no see! Still remember me?" said that man coldly that make Toshiya glance at him with a surprised face. "Hmmm. . ., seems like you still remember me! How are you then!" he said again still with a cold face and Yuu realy believe that he don't realy want to know the condition of that boy now, but to ask, "Can you freed me faster then all the useless people here?"
"K, Kyo?! H, how?" Toshiya seems to be shock to see that man.
"Free?" Kyo--okay since two person had say that his name is Kyo so why don't we followed it--continue Toshiya word with a bored face. "Hhhh. . ., don't you have another question to be asked?" Kyo said with a bored tone.
But before he got the answer the earthquake getting creazier and now it make a crack on the ground where Yunna stood.
Yunna scream like a girl(well she's a girl) and jump behind Megumi's body when she saw it, meanwhile Toshiya had make his posture.
Kyo who seems to be mad by being ignore twice in a day but from his face, Yuu know that that guy also prepared himself to what will be happend next. So she choose to act calm and watch what will be happend next too.
The ground break into two and between the two of them a disgusting and frightening monster apear from the underground. Yuu suddenly hold her breath. This is the first time for her to seeing a real monster, and seems like she won't be happy to see it.
"S**t!!! Yokai with earth element! It realy give alot of work!" Kyo said with a grumph face, like he's the one who used to fight that monster.
"Shut up! What can you do with that kind of condition fool! So just wait and see!" Toshiya said as he concentrate with the monster in front of him.
Kyo seems to be realy pissed off by Toshiya word, but before he can speak any word, Megumi had glance at him.
"Shut your mouth Kyo, Toshiya's right since. . . "
"I know! I know! I'm stuck in this pilar! Come one can't I angry to be called 'fool' by a little boy like that!" Kyo said to continue Megumi's word. Yuu look at it as she try to not laugh and she realy need to since Kyo now glance at her with an eagle eyes.
"Ame!!!" Megumi said. A clowd suddenly apear above that monster and pour a rain to it, in just a few minute that creature had change into a mud and Megumi stop her rain.
But before she notice it that mud start moving and then attack Megumi and make that woman's body flew and hit the wall.
"Tsk! Why I must handle this?" Toshiya said with a grumph face. "Hi!!!" he shout as he drew his hand toward that monster and sudenly a flame apear from his hand and burn that mud monster, and in a moment it turn into a very ugly statue that boy kick it and break it into a piece.
Yuu watch all of it with unbelief face, her hand now itchy that she want to fight too. But when she remember that she don't have any power, she don't have any choice than stay still and watch.
Yuu then glance at Kyo with a confused face. That man look at the piece in the ground with a calm face, and then he take a deep breath and blew it. Actualy Yuu start to think this guy is creazy now, the pieces are placed far away from him, so he can't just blew it right?
Unfortunetly he can. A huge amount of wind come and clean up the pieceses and left only the crack on the ground.That time Yuu remember that Kyo is a friend of Megumi and Toshiya so blew that pieceses away won't give him a hard work right.
"Seems like your power had been released too right?" Toshiya said as he smile to Kyo. But that man only look at Toshiya with a cold eyes.
"Hmph, who do you think I am? Without me, you are only a boy who still playing soccer outside this building Toshiya!" Kyo said then.
Toshiya look at Kyo with a grumph face, but just that time another monster apear behind him and make his body flew away and hit the wall just like Megumi.
Yuu watch all of it with unbelief face, she try to make her own posture, but before she can flew her flying kick Kyo had already pull her hand and place her behind his pilar.
"You stay there and watch!" he said.

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Thu Sep 11, 2008 12:12 am

Ooohh I see that there's more action here. I'm curious to find out what will happen next. Very Happy

I'm glad you found the time to update, Yuu. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:44 am

(Continue)

Yuu try to protest, but before she can do

anything, the air around her now feel unfriendly.

Slowly, the wind start circeling around her and

make her blind for some moment.
She try to wander what will happend next. But

then the wind suddenly vanished with the voice of

pain come from Kyo. Then suddenly the monster

apear in front of her like a flash and attack

her.
Ultimate pain stroke her head. Yunna try to feel

her head and then she feel that a strange liquid

flowing from her head. Yunna took down her hand

from her head and take a look at it with a

confused face. Her hand now covered by a dark red

liquid that smell disgusting.
"Blood?" she said like a fool. Then she remember

something. "Oh, right! My head wounded from the

accident yesterday. . , so it haven't recovered

yet. . . " she said with a calm face. Then she

look at the monster in front of her.
"Why?" she ask. "Why you look at me with that

kind of face?" she ask again. She notice that now

the monster is looking at her with a frightening

look.
Yunna feel that her head now speening like creazy

she start to lose her consiousness.
***
Kyo regain his consiousness again, but he just

can't believe what he see now. The apearance of

Yunna who's now standing firmly in front of the

monster realy had vanished all the pain feeling

he get from the monster attack.
That girl look at the monster with a very cold

eyes, it realy seems like she can't froze the

monster ust by looking at it.
The girl then choke the monster with her bare

hand. A very bright light covering her body for

some moment and then the monster vanished with no

trace of it.
Kyo felt that his heart start beating fast now.

He never feel that kind of aura Yuu give before.

He do know who have the same aura like Yuu, but

the aura he know is much more weaker than Yuu's.
Yuu suddenly glance at him with the same cold

eyes she gave to the monster before. Tha craked

floor suddenly restore as it used to be, and the

earthquake suddenly stop.
Kyo look at Yuu with unbelief face, but then he

notice that his body is not as stiff as he used

before, and when he look at his body, he notice

that he no longer traped in a pilar. He's free

now.
"Hmph! You said you'll protect me, but you can't

even freed your own self from that weak sealed

like that. How stupid!" Yuu said with a very cold

tone.
"Huh?" Kyo said with a confused face. He don't

remember when he ever promised to protect that

girl, then why she's talking about it now. Then

he notice that the girl in front of her is not

the same girl he know.
"Who are you?" he ask.
The girl look at him with a stupid face. "Who are

you? YOu know me! I'm. . . " the girl stop. "Who

am I?" she said and faint.
Kyo grab her body with a confused face. He realy

want to know what exactly happend here.
"Urgh . . ., what happend?" Megumi said as she

regain her consiousness back. Then she look at

Kyo with an unbeief face. "Kyo?! How can you be

free?"
***
"So, who is she exactly?" Kyo ask with a grumph

face.
"Actualy we don't realy know her. We just met her

when Megumi said she found a strange aura this

morning" Toshiya said as he sit in his seat.
Kyo sight and look at Yuu who's now sleeping on

the sofa peacefully.
"So she realy isn't Mifuyu?" he ask.
"No. Mifuyu disapear just after she used her

power to sealed you. We just can't find her

afterward. . ." Toshiya said.
"SO. . ., what do you want to do with this girl

now?" Kyo ask as he point at the sleeping Yunna.
"Hmm. ., she's using Hikari High School's

uniform. . ., so. . . " Megumi mumble as she

tought of something.
"Let's call him then!" Toshiya said. And the

three of them sight together. "I realy hate when

we have to do this. . ." the three of them said

as they look at Yunna.


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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:09 am

Ooohh new chapter. Very Happy

And man, this one was a bit bloody. Shocked

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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:07 am

Hahaha actualy this is the new chapter, all of the post above is a part of one chapter. So here's the update

Chapter.2 The Organitation

Yuu walk toward the school gate with a vatigue.
It seems that all that happend yesterday realy
had drain her energy to zero. But even she know
that what happend yesterday is only a dream, it
seems that the secne is realy real. Her body even
as energyless as yesterday.
"Yunna-chan!!! How's you doin?" Sachi shout as

she slap Yuu's shoulder with her full energy.
Yuu snaped out from her daydreaming and look at

her friend.
"Sachie-san. . .? What's the matter?" she ask

with a stupid face.
"Huh? Doesn't it became my question? You look

very pale today! What hapend?" Sachie said with a
worried tone.
"Huh? Am I pale?" Yuu ask still with a stupid

face.
"Yes Yunna you're so pale that you're face look

like a white paper to me. . ." Ayano who suddenly
gadder in the group said as she show Yuu her own
worried face too.
Yuu still look at them with a confused face. She

stop walking.
"What happend Yunna?" ask Mika who also come not

long after Ayano come.
Silent pass the group for some moment but then

Yuu start to open her lips. "Well, I know this is
a stupid question, but what's the last thing I do
yesterday?" Yuu ask.
The three of her friend look at each other with a

confused face. "We think you go straight to your
house and rest. . ." Ayano said.
"Or. . ., you don't heard our advice and go

adventuring this town alone. . .?" Mika said as
she stare at Yuu with a investigate look.
"I don't realy know!" Yuu said with an irritated

tone. "All that happend yesterday seems so real,
but when I snaped out I already on my bed!" Yuu
said with a panick tone.
"What do you mean?" ask the three of her friend

confusedly.
"Well. . ., " Yuu tell her friend about what she

saw yesterday but she seems not sure with her own
story. "but suddenly when I woke up I already in
my bed. That's why I'm start wandering if it only
a dream or reality. . . " Yuu said.
"You realy think that all of them seems so real

for you?" Ayano ask with an unbelief face when
she heard Yuu's story.
"Not realy. . ., but it realy seems like it realy

happend. . . " Yuu said.
"You must be dreaming!" Mika conclude all the

situation.
"Yes! There's no way all that thing happend in

the real world!" Sachie said with an agreement
tone.
Yuu noded. She decide to believe with all her

friend.All that happend yesterday should be a
dream. There's no way that it'll happend.
The girl smile and walk straight to the school

with a humm. She put her shoe in the shoe case
and chage her shoes. But suddenly she heard a
scream from the corridor. Yuu close her shoecase
door with a confused face and look at the place
where the scream voice come from.
Surprisingly there's already a group of senior in

the coridor, it seems they're circeling some one,
and they all look so happy that irritated Yuu's
peace world that she had build a moment ago.
"I can't believe you realy come back to this

school!!!!" said one of the senior histeriacly.
"We thought you've already death. . ., we almost

change our graduation party in to your funeral
ceremony. . . hehehe" another senior said.
"Oi. . ., did you realy think that I've already

death?" the sound in the middle of the crowd
realy familiar to Yuu's ear.
"Yunna? What's the matter?" Ayano ask confusedly

as she saw how Yuu act. Yuu snaped out and look
at Ayano.
"Ah, n, nothing. . ." she said fast. But she

still look at the crowd with a confused face.
"Ah. . ., you're a new student who transfered

here in the middle of second semester last year.
. ., it's not a weird thing. . ." Ayano said.
Yuu look at her with a confsued face that look

like she need an explaintation.
"Well, he's our senior!" Ayano said as she try to

go through the crowd.
"Huh?"
"Yeah! But he disapear around the first smester

last year. . ." Ayano said again.
"At first all student think that he's only

skipping class, but then after a month pass
there's no sign that he'll apear in the class
again, that's why that's not realy imposible if
someone sadi that he's already death. . ." Ayano
describe the situation as she sucessfuly go
through a path between two senior.
"Is there no message from his family?" Yuu ask.
"There is, but it's so weird that no one believe

in that message. . ." Ayano said again.
"You know him?" Yuu ask. It seems that Ayano know

much more then average people about this guy.
"Nah. . ., I only know his face and name. . .,

but it's not very weird since his face is realy
something that someone won't forget when they
already see him once. . ., His face is above the
average you know. . ." Ayano said as she chucled.
She realy manage to go through the crowd and now,
but Yuu still have to go through some more
senior.
"What's his name?" Yuu ask, she realy want to

know about this weird guy. And finaly she reach
the middle of the crowd, but then she frezzed to
found what in front of her.
"Hmm. . ., if I'm not mistaken his name is

Kirisawa Kyo!" Ayano said with a cheer tone.
Hearing the name Ayano gave, Yuu realy remember

what exactly happend yesterday. Esspecialy the
half pilar guy who realy pissed her off.
"KYOO?!!" she shout histeriacly.
Kyo who stand in front of her look at her with a

confused face. But then when he know who saying
his name with totaly loud voice he only smile to
Yuu.
"Is there something I can do for you?" he said as

he smile gently.
"Ah! N, Nothing!" Yuu said as she try to get out

of the crowd instantly.
"What happend?" Ayano ask unbelievely as she try

to balance her step with Yuu.
"Ah, nothing. . ., it's just weird to find

someone with Kyo name, isn't it mean bad luck?"
Yuu said as she forced her face to smile.
"I'm so sorry, but my name means King. . ." Kyo

said as he suddenly apear behind Yuu and look at
her with just the same cold eyes he used to look
at her yesterday.
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PostSubject: Re: Shijin No Goushujin-sama   Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:05 am

Woah, I'd be confused, too, if I were Yuu (the character, that is lol). I wonder how Kyo will explain this to her. Smile

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