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Age : 28
Location : My Room
Title : Master Hunter
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PostSubject: The prophecy of Rathia   Mon Oct 27, 2008 1:19 am

I deleted the update I made for this story in AM and decide to post here instead. I re-post this story I wrote myself in my own forum. this story currently goes up to chapter 11 but I'm planning to post it slowly here

Chapter 1 - Prologue

Once upon a time... (Okay, not the "Once Upon A Time" starting anymore)

...Let's go to the part where monsters wreaking havoc in the Village of Aman

"Eeek", "Shriek", "Arggh", "Warrggh"... Screams could be heard from the village.
"Where are all these monsters came from? How could they...Noooo, not the donuts!" Shouted the Village Elder.

...In a few sentences, the village was destroyed. Not even the donut shops are spared.

how could this happen...Oh, wait... It can't be... It's the prophecy
come true! The evil Rathia has awoken from her deep slumber!" Lamented
the Village Elder.

"What should we do? We couldn't fight off the monsters ourselves..." cried one of the villagers.

villager shouted "Letís grab a random person and make him the hero.
Thatís what stories usually do; guess we have no choice but to follow
the crowd"

...And so the villagers grab a random person out. It
is an unfortunate situation as the crowd has chosen Cana, the boy
destined to stop the prophecy of Rathia from destroying the whole
world. (Yay, itís a world-saving mission)

"That's it? I'm the
hero? I'm going to save the world from a random prophecy that came out
from nowhere and attacked us?" questioned Cana.

"Um, I guess i
have no choice but to tell you the story. Long time ago (500 years ago)
Rathia was a famous queen who wanted more and more fame for herself.
Along with her were her Bodyguard Jaynon and adviser Kaytesis. One day
she tried to gain the true fame by getting some help from the Evil
Magic but instead of true fame she got true ugliness and evilness
(Never ever trust the evil ones); it turned her into a hideous
lizard-looking monster.

Angered, she caused rampage and havoc
throughout the land (Did I mentioned that she gained superpowers just
now?). Then there was a hero named Anac who attempted to slay the
Rathia, but failed. He turned to the goddess of strength, Diana and
asks for her aid. Once again, Anac faced the demon but this time Diana
helped her. In the end, Rathia was finally defeated and Diana sealed
the demon into the abyss. Everyone lived happily ever after, THE END.

who is this guy whose name was actually my name spelled backwards? Meh,
you probably said that I am the reincarnation of Anac or whoever this
guy was" laughed Cana. "Meh, I couldn't believe this HEA stuff only
lasted 500 years" he added.

The village elder immediately whacks
Cana on the head and said "Boy, it has nothing to do with that. Just
get ready and have a nice journey"

"Urgh, why am I the 'Hero'..." he grumbled,ĒHmm, a 'Hero'...Not bad" he said suddenly.

He then return to his little hut (Surprisingly itís the only building left in the village) and grab his trusty wooden sword.

To Be Continued...

Chapter 2 - The Journey Begins
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PostSubject: Re: The prophecy of Rathia   Mon Oct 27, 2008 4:05 am

Hi Kinn,

I'm happy that you decided to post your story. I really enjoyed reading it on your forum and can't wait to continue from where I last read. Smile

And it's wonderful to see you active here more. Smile


Thank you for making my new set, Love. †^^
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PostSubject: Re: The prophecy of Rathia   Mon Oct 27, 2008 4:11 am

Thanks Razz I'll be posting this story little by little

Chapter 2 - The Journey Begins

Cana went into his little hut to pack up.

"Okay, now what else should I get?" Cana said after grabbing his wooden sword, his leather jacket and his trusty chopstick.

yeah I just bought some donuts earlier so I should take those as well",
he added/ He walked straight to the kitchen to grab the delicious
donuts before leaving his little hut.

As he exits the hut, the
crowds surround his hut. Some ladies are crying and some other kids are
laughing at Cana. Some even raise their hands up high and make some

"Um, am I still in Prophecy of Rathia or am I in Resident Evil? Ah, whatever matters" Cana thoughts.

"Boy... Are you willing to stop Rathia?" the village elder said.

"Meh, you forced me to do it so here I am on the road to become a true hero. Muahaha" Cana laughed.

"Anyway, adieu people, I got to go do some heroic stuff now. Tata" said Cana while jumping away from the crowd, happily.

On the roads to the main city, Athis,

now what should I doÖ Yeah! Fight some wandering monsters! Letís go
find one! I can't fight Rathia at Level 1" Cana said while he searches
around for some monsters.

Few minutes later...

"Yay, I found a little puppy!" overjoyed he said so. (Wolf cub)

Cana approached the wolf cub and whacks it with his wooden sword "Bullís eye! How much EXP do I get?" He said.

Suddenly, an unfortunate event happens. The pack of wolvesí suddenly emerged from the woods and started to chase after Cana.

"Eaaarrrgghh! No, not so fast! Not now! I don't want the Game Over screen appears too soon!" He cried and screams.

away from the pack of wolves, he's praying and hoping that he didn't
get eaten before he could fight Rathia. Although he's a loser as a hero
but he managed to dodge the flying wolfs.

As he dodges, he
laughed. Later, he could see and feel bullets flying pass his head and
through his jacket. Within a second he lost his will as he saw some
Ninja Wolves, Pirate Wolves and Mobster Wolves in front of his sight.
"I'm doomed..." He said in a low tone.

What do you think could
save him? Fortunately, a sudden lightning strike through the pack of
wolves and a shadow appears from nowhere to strike down the wolves.

"Who could that be?" Cana questioned. Who are those people who saved him?

To Be Continued

Chapter 3 - New Friends (Already?)
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