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PostSubject: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:15 am

Heya all,

So...since I am pretty down and all, I thought some poetry might do me good. This will be a place where I will post my poetry.

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Missing you

I loved you, and I still do

I want to be with you, but as much as I do

You don't want me and I can't protest you


But I want to let you know, that I missed you

Even though we have been apart for so little time

It feels as we have been apart for so long


And I want to see you, even if just for a minute

Oh, haven't you missed me, too?

Or did the days made you forget me?

Oh, how I wish I could forget you, too


The painful memories are still in my mind

And I wish I could fix my broken heart

But the love I am wishing for

Is no longer there from you


The promise you broke


You once made a promise, to stay by my side

You said you will love me forever, no matter what

But now you broke this promise

And pushed me aside


Oh, doesn't it hurt you, when you see me hurt?

Oh, don't you feel the pain, that I am feeling now?

How could you not love me?

How could you abandon
me?


All this time, I thought you loved me

All this time, I thought you cared for me

All this time, I thought that you will keep your promise


But oh well, you are not my true love

Oh well, but how can I love you still?

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:18 am

Awww, I hope things will get better for you, Love. Sad

That's some good poetry you have out there. It's very emotional and it comes straight from the heart. Hmm, the only thing I'm confused about is "abdomen"? I think it should be "abandon" but then again, I just got home and I'm a little tired at the moment. lol

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:22 am

I know you have been going through some sad and difficult times. It's good that you can channel your sadness into poem writing to release some steam. Hope you're feeling a bit better after some writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:38 am

@Phoenix:

Whoops. Sorry, I changed it. I guess I was a bit sleepy, too. lol

Anyway, here goes another poem I wrote while studying. (What? That lesson was boring!)

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Broken Heart


My heart is broken

How can I fix it?

My tears are flowing

How can I stop them?


I am trying hard to forget you

But your memories are so hard to forget

Oh, have you forgotten me that easily?

Or are my memories still in you?


Oh, don't you love me as much as I do?

Or did your heart turn suddenly into stone?

Oh, please, please love me again

Oh, please don't stay away

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:43 pm

Awww, it's another beautiful and yet sad poem. For some reason, it makes me think that you and Rosalind could relate to one another.

And lol on studying. Guess it depends on what the lesson was that day. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Mon Nov 24, 2008 4:12 am

lol Thanks, phoenix. I now feel what Rosalind felt when Alex left her. But man, it's hurtful. Now I want to kill Alex. Razz

And well, the lesson was Arabic Grammar at that time. Boooooorrrrinnnnnnnggg.

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:32 pm

Standing alone in the rain

The night has come

The rain is falling

Yet I am still standing here

I don't want to go

I need to stay

My tears are flowing down my cheeks


And here I am

Standing in the middle of the rain

Waiting for you to come

Waiting for your return

Wanting to gaze into your eyes

Wanting to see your face

Wanting to feel your love


But you didn't come

And I am still waiting

You can't see my tears cause of the rain

How could you be so mean?

How could you be so cruel?

I loved you of all my heart but least you cared


And yet, I am still waiting

Cause I know that you will come for sure

Oh please don't leave me

Oh please come here

I need you so please come

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:15 pm

Awww, this one reminds me of a Sailor Moon episode. It's the one where Lita is standing in the rain and her ex-boyfriend dumps her. I think she can relate as well.

The poem is very expressive and lovely.

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:57 pm

@Phoenix
Hearing you mentioned Sailormoon, I thought of Usagi and Mamoru---especially the anime part where Mamoru has forgotten that Usagi was his love. and a little bit of Seiya and Usagi parts in Sailor Stars arc. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:06 pm

goo stuff here.
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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:31 am

Okay, this isn't a sad poem but more of a tribute. I wrote for a very special friend and she is also my best friend. I think she will know herself. She has a Lacus siggie. Wink

A gift for a friend

When I am down and feeling all alone

Drowning in the darkness, with nobody home

And tears are flowing down my face

You suddenly come and smile at me with hope


How can I ever refuse your lovely smile?

Your friendly love can never let me down

Oh, your cheerful laugh makes me smile again


You are my hope for a better tomorrow

Oh, please don't leave my side, don't go away

I need you, so please stay


I hope this one was good. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Mon Dec 01, 2008 11:41 pm

Awww, that one's so sweet, Love. ^^

And even Alex is touched by it. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:15 am

Thank you for loving me


I could not help myself

From loving you

Forgive me if it's wrong

To love you


Your heart is so pure

And I don't think I've seen better

I've been in love before

But it was bitter

I've been heart broken


But you were an angel to me

You helped me through the pain

And never did you complain


How can I not love you?

How can I ever thank you?

For being so true

For loving me and holding me close

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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:29 am

Its beautiful. its a really good poem love
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PostSubject: Re: Love's corner of sad poetry   Sun Aug 09, 2009 10:19 am

wow awesome poems love Smile

They come right from your heart so they are all the more special
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