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PostSubject: winter love haiku   Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:00 am

i dont know much about haiku so if i mess up please tell me.please enjoy even though it is short.


his blue eyes shining.

his dark hair wet with white snow.

i love you always!


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PostSubject: Re: winter love haiku   Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:12 am

Hi hailstorm,

I took a look at your writing and it does look like the form of haiku. I must admit that it is a bit short but perhaps you can develop it some more. Since the topic is winter, you can think about what images, tastes, or sounds come to mind when you think of winter. ^^

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PostSubject: winter love haiku   Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:02 pm

thank you very much!i did edit it some but i didnt know how to extend it.sorry.but i decided to make it about the guy i like very much.thank you!
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