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 My Last Farewell

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Number of posts : 521
Location : The most isolated place in Northeastern Asia
Title : The Recluse
Registration date : 2009-01-27

PostSubject: My Last Farewell   Tue Nov 23, 2010 4:00 am

My Last Farewell

A person of highly emotional, sinned of many…
Illness of long, as he lives with it, suffer with it, together,
Thus, regarded as his “long friend” of him.

He met his best friend, as he has none before…
Thankful but his trust of no fullness couldn’t help it.
Yet his best friend has no full trust of him…

In despair, thinking to leap into pond of ice,
To have pneumonia as to commit suicide…
But no is the wise answer, he shall leave the “society”…

One of his important wish fulfilled, having a best friend...
Still, as he has been fated to deserve no trust and friends...
No matter how he put his full trust to others...

He will be shunned by the “society” of no trust and truth…
To forget his despair of sadness, as one of he lastly wishes…
Waiting his “long friend”… succumbed from it…

My last farewell might be ended here.
Til my last heartbeat arrives...
Good luck and all the best. Goodbye...


P.S. I took my work from another forum... Well, I wrote this long time ago in winter cuz sadness always come with us...
I seriously not sure it's poem or not and lots of people from there gave wonderful comments XD
No doubt, I love sad songs, music, movies etc...

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Age : 39
Location : Somewhere in New Domino looking for the love of my life ^^
Title : Hoping to be Yusei's greatest love
Registration date : 2008-03-14

PostSubject: Re: My Last Farewell   Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:27 am

Awww that's so sad, mika. You do a really great job of conveying the emotion and all. I'd love to see what other works you come up with. ^^


Thank you for making my new set, Love.  ^^
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